"Your cold open was tense and exciting enough to grab an audience’s attention right away. An audience is going to be instantly invested in the episode. You did a nice job in your description of succinctly and clearly defining each of your series regulars. It was clear through those interactions what their personalities are and how they will interact with one another throughout the series. It was a good idea to make your main character, Pen, a newbie to the world of cruise ship life, as this was a nice way to also introduce your audience to the colorful cast of characters aboard the ship and the way things work."

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Comedy Sketch Comedy Series

One of the several comedy sketches I wrote and directed. We are gearing up to do more later this fall! Head to the YouTube channel and remember to Like and Subscribe! CLICK HERE

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A short film that started winning awards during the script stage. We received 40K in funding to make this passion project!