1-on-1 Screenwriting Consulting — Joshua Young
JOSHUA YOUNG
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1-on-1 Screenwriting Consulting

A 40-time award-winning writer reads your script.

An insightful 1-on-1 Zoom meeting.

A bonus advanced AI analysis — better than many paid AI coverage services.

Let’s create your best next
Draft.

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Your Script + My Experience & Passion
Full Story Analysis
Opening Pages Marked Up
1-on-1 Zoom Session
Bonus AI Analysis
★ ★ ★ ★ ★ 40-time award-winning writer
Story editor
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What every read gives you

Whether you send a feature, a pilot or a short, the promise is the same: a thoughtful read, practical notes and a real conversation about how to move the script forward.

01 / STORY

A full written story analysis

Structure, character, pace and market readiness, in a document you can act on. Direction, not vague coverage.

02 / PAGES

Your opening pages, marked up

Line-by-line notes on formatting, tightening and craft, focused on the pages that decide whether anyone reads on.

03 / THE HOUR

A one-hour call, with me

We go through your script together so you leave knowing exactly what to do next. This is the read a bot cannot fake.

04 / BONUS

An AI script analysis, on the house

A bonus deep-dive I run and interpret myself. A second set of eyes, not the main event.

Int. the tiers — what it costs

The price changes. The depth does not.

The only difference is the length of your script and how many opening pages I mark up.

Int. feature

Feature Film

Your full-length script
$300USD
  • Full written story analysis
  • One-hour consultation call
  • Bonus AI script analysis
Marked up: Pages 1–20
The pages a reader decides on.
Int. pilot

TV Pilot

Your pilot script
$175USD
  • Full written story analysis
  • One-hour consultation call
  • Bonus AI script analysis
Marked up: Pages 1–10
Where a pilot lives or dies.
Int. short

Short Film

Your short script
$100USD
  • Full written story analysis
  • One-hour consultation call
  • Bonus AI script analysis
Marked up: Pages 1–5
Every page counts in a short.
Turnaround: two weeks, standard. Need it sooner? Fast-track to one week for +$100.
Cut to: bonus material

Why the AI analysis is a bonus, not the point.

SCRIPTBOT PRO
Results in seconds

Professional AI script notes. Instantly.

Automated feedback on the elements every screenplay needs to succeed.

  • Story structure
  • Character arcs
  • Dialogue notes
  • Market potential
Generate Report
Fast • automated • polished
Not the main event

I also work as a consultant on ethical AI integration, so I’ll tell you the truth the critique sites won’t: most of them are a detailed prompt in a nice wrapper.

I’ve run mine head to head against the popular ones. Mine comes back more accurate, more detailed and actually pointed at where to go next, so I hand it to you for free as a second set of eyes on top of my own.

You’re paying for my read and my hour. The AI is the extra in the trunk, not the driver.

Bonus with every tier
Rev. — after you’ve done the work

Come back with the next draft and see how far it moved.

Once you’ve taken the notes and rewritten, send it back. I read your revised pages the same way, and the AI pass becomes a side-by-side of your old draft against your new one.

Returning clients only • like blue pages in a writers’ room

The Revision Review

Your marked pages again, a 30-minute call and an old-versus-new AI comparison.

Feature$175was $300
Pilot$125was $175
Short$60was $100
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Tell me what you’ve written and where you feel stuck. I’ll help you choose the right consultation for the script.

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Joshua Young • Screenwriter • Story EditorFeatures • Pilots • Shorts